I've been familiar with your editing for quite a while, and this is actually my favorite video from you..it's quite IRONIC you auditioned with it...ANYWAYS, I really like the video, despite some minor flaws in flow, it has some interesting techniques featured it. You also seem to possess quite a great potential to do far better than your usual edits but for some reason you're not showing it.
It's a definite YES from me. :]
Welcome to the studio, Ash!